DescriptionREWRITE, PROOFREAD AND MAKE IT CONCISE AND PRECISE. MAKE SURE IT MEETS THE THRESHOLD EXPECTATION PLEASE.What am I required to do in this assignment?You will be required to create a digital narrative of a persons healthcare journey in which you demonstrate the planning, delivery and co-ordination of their care. The narrative must include detailed discussion of how relevant policies and legislation influenced the care provided and an evaluation of your own contribution to the persons care.Information has been passed down from generation to generation, through stories (narratives). Your narrative will be presented digitally using a choice of technology that you feel comfortable with. For example, you may choose to submit your narrative as a video or audio recording. You must support your work with a reference list/bibliography as appropriate. What do I need to do to pass? (Threshold Expectations from UIF)Contextualise the case and setting of the healthcare journey, identifying an appropriate person from practice maintaining confidentiality at all timesDescribe the case utilising an evidence-based explanation of the persons condition, their associated health need and the impact it had on them on their family Justify and clinically reason the care you planned, how it was coordinated and delivered, referring to any nursing theories, processes or modelsReference and discuss relevant policies and legislation referred to and detailed in the accountAppraise, your own role and your influence on care FEEDBACK FROM MY LECTURER You have submitted a narrative which is in the main clearly presented and narrated. There is some evidence of an understanding of COPD and you have incorporated both ADL and biopsychosocial elements when discussing your patient’s care. The psychological impact was well explored, using evidence from literature.To improve your grades – although you have used many references, it was not always clear how they were related to the patient as they were often cited after discussing your patient for example ” respiratory careteam skill mix provided the basis for optimisation of lung function and resolution of symptoms”(Nicol and Hollowood, 2019). An alternative approach of addressing the skill mix and then evaluating it using the evidence would be less descriptive. For example -the effective use of the respiratory skill mix, demonstrated through….. is supported by Nicol…( ) findings however this was limited by….The use of the MDT and skill mix was not evidenced in your narrative – how did the team work together – this would have been a good opportunity to evaluate the role of the nurse and of your influence in the care ( this is a threshold expectation and was omitted).The social aspect was a little vague – consider what support groups you could have referred this patient to – again this can be evaluated in terms of appropriateness during acute phase of the admission.I would suggest more in-depth understanding of COPD is needed as the exacerbation was not secondary to chest pain but to a chest infection and your explanation of oxygen titration was muddled. Your submission was 18.30 minutes long and therefore the last 2 minutes cannot be included in the marking.Over all I can see that you have tried hard but you have not yet met the threshold expectations.

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